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Nirvana
submitted by Vinicius Moraes
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Nirvana
submitted by Vinicius Moraes

Once inseparable friends, Marlena Watkins, Jensen Krail, Victor Burton and Sara Coleman haven’t spoken to each other in two years. However, their lives once again collide when Jacob Breslin, a loved friend and the only one who remained friends with all four commits suicide.

Now the four teenagers who remained behind must continue on with their lives having to deal with the insecurities and the difficult process of growing up whilst mourning for the loss of a dear friend. Will the four be brought together by this tragedy, or are they simply two different, after two years apart, to the point where they don’t know who the other person is anymore?

Creator's Note

In a nutshell, this project came to be after some brainstorming around the idea of a different approach over the theme of adolescence. Basically, I fell in love with the idea of depicting this tough (more on that in a sec) phase of anyone’s life in a more realistic manner, with characters that weren’t stereotyped to their core and who had bigger concerns than sex in their lives. So then came the characters and I absolutely fell in love with the four protagonists of my story.

So what do I mean when I say that adolescence is a tough period of life? Well, I’m writing this for obviousness’ sake, as I believe that if someone doesn’t remember the pains of growing up, trying to find your place in the universe, mulling over ENDLESS insecurities, doubts, fears, the question of whether become a true, authentic individual to yourself or to ‘fit in with the masses’, then that person is either stupid or a victim of Alzheimer’s. Probably both.

So this is what this series would be about. In a nutshell, someone described this as a ‘darker take on the teen drama subgenre’. That’s not far from the truth, although instead of darker, I’d say ‘more realistic’ and instead of ‘teen drama subgenre’, I’d say ‘straight drama with teenagers as protagonists’.

Characters

SARA COLEMAN (Portrayed by Alexz Johnson)
When she was fifteen years old, Sara was diagnosed with clinical depression. Two years later, she still finds herself struggling with the disease, but trying to overcome it in her own pace. Using drugs and alcohol as forms of escapism, she’s also a kind, loyal friend, as she was to Jacob Breslin, whenever she allows herself to get close to someone to the point where she trusts them.

MARLENA WATKINS (Portrayed by Ellen Page)
Marlena knew Jacob ever since they were both five. In the past few years, she slowly developed a self-destructive personality, which didn’t get in the way of her friendship with Jacob, but which has turned her into a distant girl.

JENSEN KRAIL (Portrayed by Emile Hirsch)
Jensen is into sports. He could be called a jock were it not for the fact he hates jocks, preferring, instead, to have a personality of his own, hang with the people he considers real friends and simply be himself, high school rules be damned. Like he did with Marlena, Jacob considered him to be his best friend.

VICTOR BURTON (Played by Ed Westwick)
Closed, angsty, alone. Victor Burton’s life has taken a turn to the worst in the past couple of years. Once a friendly guy, his own doubts and insecurities have scared and haunted him to the point today he’s a shadow of the boy he used to be.

Vinicius's pilot for Nirvana is available in PDF format.

Got a comment for Nirvana? Bang it over to the Nirvana Discussion Thread.

The Pilot Process

If you would like to air a virtual series at GVP, then send an email to gvp.contact@gmail.com with the title 'GVP Series Pitch'. The email has to include a completed pilot for your series and a pitch that includes the following:

- A synopsis of what the show is about. Your premise and the themes you would like to explore, in a nutshell.
- A full list of characters and short descriptions of each. We don't need to know life stories here, just enough to show that you've put a modicum of thought into them.
- A few episode ideas. Again, not a full season, just premises to give us an idea of the stories you want to tell.

Please write the pitch inline (in the actual email) and attach the pilot to it as a separate file. We prefer PDF, but any format is okay. Script or prose is fine as well. We'll read anything if it's written well.

Within a couple of weeks, a GVP admin will respond with notes, comments, and questions along with a thumbs up or down. Thumbs down is self explanatory. Thanks, but no thanks.

Thumbs up means a few things. First, your pilot airs on the GVP website in the Pilots section. You get a thread here for readers to respond in the Pilots forum and GVP admin will post their thoughts on it.

At this stage of the game, we'll also require a second episode to be written. This is mainly because a lot of people can write one episode and flake out after that. A second shows more of a commitment and investment. A willingness to put in the work instead of "I had this cool idea I wrote up."

We make our final decision based on the strength of all these things. We're not asking for professional level work here because we're not professionals ourselves, but show some respect for your work. We'll return that same respect.

One thing that will immediately disqualify a hopeful showrunner is an incomplete submission. That is that any email must have both a pitch and a pilot. If one or the other is missing, it's an automatic deletion. No exceptions.

Hope to hear from you soon!

Michael Jay
GVP Owner/Operator